The Night Yellow Creek Ran Red
Ulysses Fischer was a hermit who lived in the outskirts of Yellow Creek. Children loved him because he would play in the muck, told tales about ghosts and dragons, and knew how to build tree forts that were almost as grand as the ones they could imagine. He was also one of the only adults they knew who didn't think it was "adorable" when they talked about ways they thought the world worked.
"I bet that if you took a bulldozer and dug to the center of the earth," Jason Beesinger would say on a cool October day, "you would find a big city where it's always hot!"
Ulysses would stroke his scraggly beard for a moment, deep in meditation. "There's only one way to find out!" He would eventually declare.
And the rest of the afternoon would be spent in the quarry, digging a hole with hands and sticks and a single shovel shared between the whole gang.
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Ulysses lived a life devoid of shame. He bathed only when he felt like swimming in the creek, dressed in outrageous clothes, slept in a van, and was unabashed about his various bodily functions. If a person got confrontational with him, he was a mean fighter not afraid to spit or bite. But usually no one had any reason to get confrontational with him, save a few high school kids who learned their lesson quickly. No one paid Ulysses much attention at all, in fact, save the group of kids who idolized him and some lazy cops who would pester him about moving his van when the spirit moved them.
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There were two sorts of children in Yellow Creek. The first was a small class that spent their days exploring the forest and creek, who played games of imagination, and rode bicycles over makeshift ramps in the mud. Their parents encouraged their time outside, and complained when they felt too much time was being spent on video games. Although these parents had become accustomed to a lot of scraped knees and the occasional missing child scare - which was always resolved when said child came back home with a guilty look at the end of the day - they knew it was better than sheltering their children.
Then there was the other kind of child, the majority. That is, those whose parents were uncomfortable with letting them leave the house unsupervised and didn't see the need for playing outside. These children tended to spend long hours in front of the TV, and when their friends came over imagination games were generally restricted to the ones that could be played without climbing an oak or jumping off a ledge into a small body of water.
Needless to say, the second group had never even heard of Ulysses. As for the smaller first group, there wasn't a day that went by without the thought of rushing out to play with him after school. And of course, their parents all heard about the eccentric folk hero Ulysses Fischer so frequently they had learned to tune out at the mention of his name. Initially they assumed he was in the same 7-12 age bracket as his fan club, or an imaginary friend of sorts. Naturally, when they found out that he was an unemployed 25-year-old they were aghast. But, after a bit of investigation, they found out he was the older brother of 11-year-old Daniel Fischer. It seems that even though he wasn't on speaking terms with his parents any longer, Ulysses was still more than happy to watch out for his neglected younger sibling in his ample spare time. A few of these parents even invited the Fischer brothers over for dinner. (Never more than once, mind you, mostly due to Ulysses' personal hygiene.)
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That summer the kids noticed a few changes in Ulysses. First off, he generally smelled a lot nicer. And his beard was starting to look well-groomed. Further, although this was something no one could ever be sure of as he was already a notoriously good grinner, it seemed like his grins had become even wider than previously and they had a new element to them; like he had a secret which a glimmer in his eyes threatened to betray. Not even Daniel Fischer, who in truth had been drifting apart from Ulysses with age, could say what was up.
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It should be mentioned that Ulysses was - despite his modest lifestyle and outlandish garb - not half bad looking and even rather charming in his own way. And as such, he had managed to find a girlfriend that was willing to overlook his oddball quirks and lack of direction in life. Becka Lavigne had dyed hair and was unpopular. But she was a good person, Ulysses wouldn't have had her otherwise, and he was entertaining the notion of falling in love with her. Becka was also, sadly, a junior in High School. And when her parents found out about her relationship with Ulysses - otherwise known as the weird hermit in the van - they filed charges against him.
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Ulysses had poor foresight when it came to his choice of girlfriends, but he was neither stupid nor guilty. The charges were eventually dropped. Nothing wrong with holding hands with a younger girl, the police said. And the Lavignes were never able to prove that matters had gone any further than that.
It should have been enough that Becka had been sent off to live with her grandparents. But the arbitrary god of luck, allied with the sly powers behind gossip and hearsay, had different plans for Ulysses.
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It would be all too easy to blame the individuals involved in spreading the rumors. But when some things are taken together, they take a life of their own. There were a few facts circulating which were at the root of the uproar; the most important being that Ulysses, a young male, had indeed been the subject of statutory rape charges that were later dropped (this second point of course glossed over). Further, it was by this point known that he had what could only be described as an entourage of children visiting him frequently. Thirdly, those who had engaged in limited interaction with him could say that he was malodorous, given to theatrical displays of eccentric behavior, and frequently seen in an odd assortment of garb.
It matters not what the law may say. There are certain crimes that, once accused, a person is always considered guilty of until proven innocent. Most of these crimes are sexual, notably rape, but pedophilia takes a close second. And from a sturdy foundation of those facts mentioned above, it did not take much in the imagination on the part of frantic parents for the accusations to begin, and soon skyrocket in degree of atrocity.
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It isn't often that panic mounts to a degree that a parent's meeting is called in Yellow Creek. Ulysses Fischer, unaware of the swirling miasma of fear and hate swirling around him, was unfortunate enough to have one such meeting assembled in his honor. An atmosphere of uncertainty that saw the start of the assembly quickly gave way to shouts, cries, and solemn oaths. Before the meeting was adjourned, rumors that were previously speculation had somehow solidified into empirical fact.
Not to say that Ulysses didn't have defenders. In fact, many of those that had him over for dinner were the first to call for cooler heads. These same defenders were the first to disperse after the assembly had been called to a close with no formal resolution. But even most of those that fervently believed every vile thing said about Ulysses Fischer eventually went home.
It was only the most passionately enraged who, after whispered instructions from a man named Elroy Yates, assembled under the cover of darkness. There were only a few of them, a small slice of the community really, that silently set out that night.
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Not a single one of those men who stalked off to Ulysses Fischer's van had a child who had even met Ulysses. But neither had any of them fabricated fanciful stories that were presented that dark night, they had merely been presented with them as though it was fact. None considered himself anything less that a caring father and devoted husband. To the last man, they called each other honest men and perhaps they were. But bloodthirsty spirits whispering promises of justice pushed them forward.
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The van appeared in the distance, silhouetted against creek which the town took its name from. The implacable crew grew near steadily, subconsciously afraid of what came next.
Elroy Yates knocked twice on the rear door of the van. The door opened and Ulysses poked his smiling head out.
"Wipe that grin off your face, faggot" Elroy growled.
Ulysses looked confused and said "what seems to be the tro--." He was cut off by a hook to the jaw.
Ulysses did not go down without a fight. In fact, he went down fighting like an animal; scared, confused, and deadly. Biting and spitting. As they went in on him hard, he fought back even harder.
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Whenever Elroy was asked how he lost his eye, he'd mutter something about a fishing accident and with a look of shame change the subject. After Ulysses' body was found, no one ever brought the issue up again.
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Half of Yellow Creek showed up for the funeral, including many of those that had hated him the previous month. When the priest asked for a moment of silence, Elroy muttered loud enough for everyone to hear; "He was like a dog."
And Jason Beesinger replied; "He was like a dog; he was our best friend."


38 Comments:
Hmm, this is sort of a follow-up to Natalie Grace, but not really. Thanks to UTMG for giving me the original idea for this story. At least, the conversation about how people who are nice to kids are generally suspected of being pedophiles. Although I fear this story turned out a bit sad and sappy.
i really like trevor, love the ending.
and a happy independence day to you, keep on writing my brother.
Thank you Rob, I will admit that I borrowed this ending heavily from a story by the infamous Latigo Flint that involved boys who fiddled with saddles.
I was riveted by this. You remind me of Goldling. Very sharp allegory. Thoughts of all the examples we've seen of this on the media and ever read about or heard from another were all evoked. Too many parallels. Too many.
This is pretty darned powerful, Trevor. You certainly can spin a tale. Story teller. Sign of a real writer. Hope your Independence Day is a good one.
Donnetta
Excellent, Trevor. You kept me engaged from beginning to end. So true to human nature.
I hope you give consideration to writing screen plays. Your stories all have that "visual" quality.
I also wanted to say that it was cool that you made him a scrapper to the last. He did have that dignity, to take the eye of one of those around him who acted on such skewed perceptions.
This almost had a "To Kill a Mockingbird" feel to it, I thought. Or maybe something by Steinbeck. Ulysses reminded me of one of Steinbeck's characters.
Eric: Golding, you say! Why thank you though you may go to far.
Donnetta: Thank you Donnetta Lee, I hope you had a mighty fine Independence day as well. (But being Canadian I celebrate Canada day, which is 3 days earlier).
EA Monroe: Thank you Mrs. Monroe. But visual you say? Hm, I wasn't aware of this. To be honest I generally try to go very light on the detailed descriptions, I would prefer the reader be left to their own imagination to fill in all the blanks.
Eric: Thanks eric. I couldn't bear to write it any other way.
Josie: Steinbeck, Harper Lee, Golding. You know my head is going to float right off my head if you people continue with this!
Good story of a Man vs society story. It is nice how you spilt the community into conformist and non-conformist. I think how you break up the story into short sections is really working for the story. The story could even be longer, maybe novella length. The reason why I say that is because the character and story kept my attention.
Wonderful story Trevor. Sad, but wonderful.
perhaps a bit far, but your description of the politics in groups of children and adults who behave like children certainly hearkened to Mr. Goldling. At least, your words speak of familiarity with him and his work.
You can tell by your writing that you do not have children. You write as if the world is safe and worried parents have gone mad. Good parents know better. Even the bad ones know, but just don't do better.
Camplin: Thank you. Novella you say? Hmm, that's what happened with that Harper Lee character. Ah, look what you've made me consider now, Camplin!
IOHOOH: Thank you.
Eric: Heh, well I think everyone has read Lord of the flies, at least.
Beth: Right now, you sound like the sort of person who would complain "You write as if there is no such thing as a criminal nigger" if I wrote something like that aforementioned "To Kill a Mockingbird" back in the time of segregation. There are pedophiles and other nasty things in the world, sure, but that isn't anything new and it is certainly no reason to ban kids from playing outside.
One of the movies I've really liked in a fairly long time is Little Children with Kate Winslet and I don't remember the fellow's name. But this story reminds me a fair bit of Little Children, in respect to the parents' reaction. The man in the movie though is a pedophile and it gets rather disturbing.
(I recommend this film if you haven't seen it yet.)
I don't know which sort of parent I would be if I found myself in Yellow Creek's predicament. I would never go as far as support violence towards an "assumed" character, but who knows, I might be the first to pull my child out of the pool if Ulysses ever came down for a swim. There's that shared sentiment of "better safe than sorry."
Good story.
Poor, poor Ulysses.
Life is tough when you're living in a van, down by the river.
Then again, I've also known a girl in jr. high who has cried rape. There were definite indications that proved she had lied.
I didn't even know the guy that she accused, but a girl I was to befriend almost 2 years later did, and she said this girl that said she was violated made his life hell.
I understand why 'guilty until proven innocent' holds so strongly in cases of rape or pedophelia. What if they (the victims) were truly victims?
Damn, I loved it! Yeah, it has a Harper Lee groove to it, and also reminds me of something deep in the pages of "Its a Boy's Life", but more than that,
from here,
from the south,
it reads true......
as if told from the porch......
I really enjoyed this - not sappy at all.
I think that in fact child abuse ranks number one as the crime where the accused is usually considered guilty until proven otherwise - especially if the media gets wind of the accusations. Often with rape it's the opposite, at least when the accused is famous - people are anxious to forget the whole ordeal and get back to watching Kobe drill threes.
Anyway, great story.
I'm always surprised and entertained by your tales.
Very good. It is very well-written.
I don't like to let my kids play outside, but if you saw where I lived you probably woudln't blame me. I try to keep inside cool though.
I didn't think that ending was sappy. I thought it was realistic.
Trevor, this story kicked righteous ass, and was neither sad nor sappy in any way.
It was touching.
>There are pedophiles and other nasty things in the world, sure, but that isn't anything new and it is certainly no reason to ban kids from playing outside.
Good call. I was out with a friend and her kids the other day and the 6 year old boy was climbing over a statue about 5m up. I told her I thought it was great that she let him do it. She thought, for a moment, that I was using sarcasm to indicate my disapproval. But my point was that the dangers of being safe (growing up to be an unhealthy overweight wuss) were much less than the dangers of falling (a few broken bones).
Erika: Thanks, Erika. I wouldn't trust my kids around Ulysses either, to be honest. I would probably assume he was guilty. But I also recognize that there is something wrong about that, an evil of sorts, to behave in this manner. Hmm, I'll look into that movie.
Jay: Well, there is also a certain freedom to living outside of the expectations of society. He was able to be happy and feed himself, up until he go killed. And he didn't have to spend 40 years as a wage slave.
Pie: I don't know how often the "cry rape" thing happens, but it does indeed happen. And it can ruin a man's life. But I guess it's better than living in a society where the woman is instantly suspected of "inviting it", which is the way it was for generations older than us.
Singleton: Thank you. I think it draws parallels to "To Kill a Mockingbird" because of the assumption of guilt aspect to it. And the angry mob which is really just a concerned segment of society. But I wasn't thinking of Harper Lee when I wrote it.
Benjibopper: I think I'll have to disagree with you on the rape point. At least for people I know. If you are accused of rape within the younger generations today you are assumed to be guilty. This applies to Kobe as well; I don't know a single person who originally thought he was innocent. And look at that Duke Lacross team. People were screaming for those guys' blood, and it turned out none of them had even slept with her in the end (never mind rape). And even after, there were people saying "well, those guys are certainly no angels". As if despite their innocence, they somehow deserved all the hate from the media they got.
Grace: Thanks, neko-chan
BBE: I'm glad you didn't take offense, in that case. I don't think it is bad parenting in any case. Thanks BBE!
Toast: Thank you toast, our conversation about people who are concerned with pedophiles is what is what prompted me to write it you know.
David: Climbing! Good point, David. I take it that this is something you did as a child? Heh, you know I used to always climb all over anything I could find. Same with my brother. I guess most kids will if given the chance, what with our ape genes and all. My mom didn't like it, but my dad didn't see anything wrong with it. Sure, we hurt ourselves a few times. But I think that's an important part of learning about the world around you. Also, I think that climbing is a good way to improve spatial awareness and problem solving.
titles in the mail!
>Climbing! Good point, David. I take it that this is something you did as a child?
Yes. And I don't recall anyone being too worried that I was in trees or could get up on to the roof of the house without needing a ladder. But then people didn't worry about a lot of other stuff in those days. I think I grew up not being afraid of most things... and I'm glad of that.
Yeah, I agree with the others. This wasn't sappy at all. That was a good closing line. I was going to make a joke that Ulysses was like a dog in other ways, too. But... it didn't seem appropriate, so I decided that it would be classless and rude.
Whew!
I used to eat my lunch in the school park next to my work. I was asked to leave by the principal but not after asking for my business card is case there were complaints.
Curious and sticky dilemmas were invoked here. Good stuff!
Well there you go.
That makes UTMG feel pretty good*
*I will never refer to myself in the third person again.
Singleton: Thanks!
David: This weekend at the Vancouver Folk Festival I climbed a tree. It was a tall one, when I got up high I sort of thought "Wow, this is too high!"
Scott: Heh, you should have went for it Scott, this is a free-speech zone.
Big Ben: Yeah, but I can sort of understand that, the principal was just covering his ass.
oh-mi-Gawd... that story was sure something...have to say, I loved the last reply.
Cheers!
My dad refused to hold my hand one day. He openly apologised and said people looked at him funny (especially if I was wearing my school uniform). Eventually he dated a girl the same age as me and he was heartbroken when they seperated.
Your body grows older but if you have love and respect for someone it is very difficult to know if it is okay or not.
My dad asked me did I think there was something wrong with him. How sad that he had to ask.
Do you ever send your stuff out to get published? I've seen so much worse get put into print. This really is good, as you knew when writting it, proabably. I'd bet it would draw attention and at least some hand written rejection notices.
BTW
Thanks for the comments. Singleton just lent me one of her paintings and I wrote a poem to that, if you wanted to take a look.
Crashdummie: Why thank you crash dummie, and it is nice to see you here.
GGB: At the same time, I can understand the stigma behind inter-generational relationships. I think the idea is, a lot of times the younger person has unrealistic expectations and gets used. Or something. I don't know.
Eric: I've never submitted anything to get published. Honestly, I don't know who I would have to send it to. I'm just starting to get to the point where I am comfortable enough with what I write to try to get it published.
this one stood out, especially.
I haven't sent out in a long time, myself, but that's about to change.
A "Poet's and Writer's" guide is important. Once you decide on sending it, send the same story to ten places at once. It's way better to (possibly) have to decline one of the places than wait around for rejection. My old prof was even double published once. She said she let them sort it out, and never heard another word about it.
Range around in your choices. The big, real Poet's and Writer's (as opposed to the mag, which is also good) will also have where you can send that story to win undergrad and grad school grants. That's the real money (in the hundreds or thousands), and they print it somehow so its definitely publication. No matter, it looks great on all future cover letters and refs, like all publication does.
There are even non-English major specific grants for fiction that you can win. Seriously; you might truly surprise yourself.
In reading the story parallels kept coming to my mind between your Ulysses and a young black child who was lynched in 1954 named Emmet Till.
Till was from Chicago and visiting relatives in the Alabama I believe it was, so he was not aware of the ways of deep rooted segregation of the south. The truth of the story is either one of two.
He had a cleft palate and had a sort of whistle when he spoke, he went into the towns general store and was watching two old men play checkers and said something to the men with this peculiar whistle and the white owner of the store immediately thought the boy was whistling at his wife or he was with a group of newly made friends and in a moment of bravado did whistle at the white woman as she came on to the porch of the store.
That night he was taken from his relatives house and beaten so badly that he was unrecognizable and one of his eyes was literally torn from his head before his 12 year old body was dumped into the river where he was found the next morning.
When the body was shipped back to Chicago for the funeral his mother insisted that the casket be open so the entire world could see the harsh reality of segregation and rumor run rampant.
It is said that over 10,000 people walked by the casket to view this murdered child and that the open casket was broadcast briefly on the nightly news.
This incident was really the start of the modern era of the civil rights movement, not long after his funeral; Thurgood Marshall argued Brown v Board of Education (1954) before the Supreme Court of America and won his case that threw out all of the separate but equal laws concerning school segregation.
Soon after that although not the first black ticketed for refusing to give up a seat for a white man, Rosa parks was ticketed and Martin Luther King Jr. Decided the time was right and the Birmingham AL bus boycott was on. It should be mentioned that Rosa parks was a member of the NAACP and a secretary for them in her off time so her and King had worked together.
Your story well told, doesn't remind me of harper Lee or Steinbeck but of crowds in self righteous anger lynching an innocent in reality.
Peace
TWM
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